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IELTS Reading: Paraphrasing Practice

Virtually every IELTS Reading question involves some form of paraphrased language; if the questions used the exact same language as the passage and involved a simple word hunt, there would essentially be no test at all!

To answer Reading questions quickly and confidently, you must be able to match the rephrased language that appears in the questions to its original counterpart in the passages. The following exercises are designed to help you practice this skill.

(Answers are at the bottom of the page.) 

Match the numbered phrases with their rewritten versions below. Each answer is used only once.  

Aviation is a (1) stubbornly difficult strand of transport to decarbonise. Aircraft burn huge amounts of fossil fuel, for business travel, leisure activities and tourism that used to be (2) prohibitively expensive but in recent decades have become accessible to large populations as fossil fuels became cheaper (3) in real terms .

Demand management aside – and that too is on the table, of course, alongside that Swedish phrase flygskam, or ‘flight shame’ – very few (4) industry observers truly think that batteries will make the sort of gains in energy density to ever be capable of displacing liquid fuels for (5) aviation applications . Hence, the question arises whether sustainable replacements for fossil liquid fuels can be developed and then made in (6) sufficient quantities .

(Source: https://www.alumni.ox.ac.uk/article/towards-sustainable-aviation-fuel )

A. In the absolute sense

B. Use in the field of aviation

C. Persistently challenging

D. Too costly to be possible

E. Large-enough amounts

F. People who follow the aviation business

What did the Romans ever do for us? It seems they added an inch to the average height of their British subjects — they came, they saw, we prospered. And after taking a plunge during the Anglo-Saxon era, the height of the average inhabitant rose again in the wake of the Norman Conquest. These are just two of the findings of new research using data from skeletal remains to calculate how the average height of men rose or fell over 2,000 years of history in what is now England. The result is (1) a startling picture of changes in health and wellbeing.

Using data of skeletal remains of men aged between 21 and 49 years from a range of archaeological excavations across England, they deduced (2) individuals’ full heights from their femur length. Lead author Dr Gregori Galofré-Vila, from the Department of Sociology at the University of Oxford, said: ‘We believe our results shed new light on the development of health in England over the very long run.’

He and his team worked on the basis that height, linked with childhood nutrition, is (3) a good measure of  wellbeing and can be estimated accurately from the length of a full grown man’s femur. Biologists and epidemiologists have long recognised that although (4) the main causes of variation in individual height may be genetic, changes in the economic, social and environmental circumstances are reflected in the mean heights of different groups of people at any given time.

The working paper reveals that men in this area of Britain became taller when it was under Roman occupation (200–410AD), with average height rising from 167cm (5ft 6in) to 170cm (5ft 7in). The researchers suggest this rise in average height (5) coincided with the Romans’ improved water supply and sanitation systems and a more varied diet. Heights did not decline immediately after the Romans left Britain in 410, but fell from 600AD. The paper (6) highlights previous research suggesting that health (7) may have deteriorated when populations moved out of the towns and cities set up by the Romans, abandoning the more hygienic water supplies and waste-disposal systems. Plague and pestilence then became common and infectious diseases were on the increase, with archaeological evidence also suggesting that (8) diets were inadequate , notes the paper.

(Source: https://web.archive.org/web/20190514234756/http://www.oxfordtoday.ox.ac.uk/news/2017-04-28-tall-and-short-it-how-average-english-height-has-changed-over-2000-years )

A. Food did not provide sufficient nutrients

B. Might have become worse

C. Occurred at the same time as

D. A surprising image

E. The primary reasons for differences

F. Calls attention to earlier studies

G. How tall people grew to be

H. A reliable assessment 

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Task 1 & 2: Paraphrasing

Learn how to paraphrase for IELTS and improve your writing score with simple techniques like synonyms and sentence combining. Start practising now!

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Paraphrasing is essential in the IELTS test. It's a great skill to have for speaking and it's especially important for the writing section. This skill shows that you not only understand the question but that you can discuss it fully. If you write the original statement in your tasks, it may not be counted and it could hurt your word count.

What is paraphrasing?

Paraphrasing is writing the same information using different vocabulary, phrases, and structures.

How do I paraphrase?

Paraphrasing can be a daunting task. Here are some simple techniques that can help you paraphrase well in your writing:

Use synonyms

Synonyms are words that have the same meaning. Using synonyms is an easy way to create a new sentence that has the same meaning.

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society.

Some individuals believe that parents should teach their children how to be a positive part of their community.

Make sure that the synonyms you are using have the same meaning, and not similar, as this could change the meaning of the sentence.

Some people believe that car emissions have a massive impact on the environment.

Incorrect: Some people believe that car emissions have a large impact on the environment.

Correct: Some people believe that car emissions have an enormous impact on the environment.

Be careful because some synonyms can be used in some situations but not in others.

The amount of fish consumed in the world has increased dramatically.

Incorrect: The amount of fish used in the world has increased dramatically.

The amount of fuel consumed when driving largely depends on the vehicle.

Correct: The amount of fuel used when driving largely depends on the vehicle. 

Also, grammar is important when using synonyms.

Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness.

Having money does not necessarily ensure satisfaction.

2. Change word order

Putting words and phrases in different places within the sentence is another simple way to paraphrase.

The percentage of stressed children in western society has increased by 15% in the last ten years.

In the last ten years, the percentage of stressed children in western society has increased by 15%.

Again, the meaning of the sentence may change when changing the word order.

Successful sports professionals earn more money than people in other important professions.

Incorrect: People in other important professions earn more money than successful sports professionals.

Correct: People in other important professions earn less money than successful sports professionals.

3. Change word form

Along with word order, you can change word form. This involves changing vocabulary from nouns to verbs, adjectives to adverbs, and so on.

Nowadays, crimes are becoming more violent.

Nowadays, crimes are being committed more violently.

Once again, grammar is important when changing word form.

The level of crime has increased noticeably in different ways.

Incorrect: There was an increase noticeably in the level of crime in different ways.  

Correct: The increase in the level of crime has been noticeable in different ways.

4. Active to Passive

Changing your sentences from active to passive voice can be more difficult than the other techniques; however, it shows a variety in your grammar structures.

Active: Technological advances have replaced people in the workforce.

Passive: People in the workforce have been replaced by technological advances.

Make sure you know how to change the structure of a sentence before trying to use the passive voice.

Children today play very violent video games.

Incorrect: Children today are played by very violent video games.

Correct: Very violent video games are played by children today.

5. Combine sentences

The ability to combine sentences gives you more opportunity to change word order as well as shows off more variety in your writing.

Some people believe that animals should have the same rights as humans. Other people believe that animals should be used for various needs such as food and research.

Some people believe that animals should have the same rights as humans, while others believe they should be used for various needs such as food and research.

When combining sentences, make sure that the transitions you are using are correct.

Some people believe that logging is a serious problem. They believe that it may lead to the extinction of animal life.

Incorrect: Some people believe that logging is a serious problem, while others believe that it may lead to the extinction of animal life.

Correct: Some people believe that logging is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life.

Practice using these techniques in your writing to become more comfortable with paraphrasing. Paraphrasing can lead to better writing, which in turn, can lead to a better writing score.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Paraphrasing Practice 2

Paraphrasing Practice Exercise 2

The aim of this lesson is paraphrase the paragraph by using the words given below. This is a great practice for IELTS writing task 2. It is all about choosing the right words.  The paragraph below is based on a writing task 2 topic that has been reported this month, May 2017: Companies Sponsoring Sports Events.

This is the second paraphrasing practice exercise for writing task 2. If you want to see the first one, click here:   Paraphrasing Practice Exercise 1

Paraphrase the words in this paragraph using the words in the box below. Only paraphrase a word if you are sure it is appropriate to do so.

It is sometimes thought that it is beneficial for companies to sponsor sports events through advertising. By doing this, extra funding, which is often lacking, can be raised to support sports events and ensure that they continue to run. Furthermore, companies can also contribute clothing or equipment which supports the event, teams and players.

Paraphrasing Options:

You must write the paragraph above again by paraphrasing it using the words below. You do not need to use all the words. You must decide which words to use and which words not to use.

some citizens believe       /        some people believe       /      advantage       /   good       /      advantageous        /       industries          /  businesses          / sporting occasions        /      matches   /     when we do this        /    in this way      /      extra cash     /    a lack of      /      in short supply        /   sports matches   /    And      /     industries    /    businesses    /    give      /    donate        /   attire  /  groups     /      performers    /   coordinate

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occasionally it is believed that sponsoring sports events via advertising is good for companies .this not only provides extra money to the sports events which they are always deficient of but also makes sure that these events will keep on running .In addition , providing merchandise or equipment is another way companies can help teams and players.

Hi Liz, I would like you to know that your site has been so helpful to me as I prepare for my IELTS exam on May 30th.

I just have one question about paraphrasing as I understood, you need to paraphrase and find the synonyms for almost all of the words of IELTS question task 2 per your advice in your lesson in “background and thesis statement”; however, in this practice test, you only replaced the synonym of few words. Hence, which one should we follow in writing our introduction in writing test task 2? Thanks in advance for your feedback.

You do not need to replace almost all the words. You paraphrase those words that are possible to paraphrase and then write the sentence again your way. This often means changing the grammar and sentence structure.

Hi Liz, After I bought your book about ideas, I found that you did not include the question for every topic. I found this paragraph here by searching on google and it is matching with the first topic in your book. Can you please send me these questions if possible?. I think it is a waste of time for me to search for them.

Click on “Writing T2” on the RED BAR at the top of the website to access all free information, tips, lessons, essay question, etc for writing task 2.

Are we using pen or pencil to write this essay’s

See this page: https://ieltsliz.com/ielts-help-faq/

mam can we use pupil instead of children to paraphrase the word children

That would only be possible if you were writing about school. Synonyms are often limited due to context.

Hi Liz, my question is not related with this post. It is about grammar which we use in Task 2. Could you give me some tips and advice about grammar? My essays’ feedbacks are always about grammar mistakes.Thanks in advance!

I think the key is to know your limitations. If your grammar is not strong, you should not aim to make complex sentences. You should aim to make safe sentences which are error free and have a clear meaning. Your grammar score is only 25% of your marks. Even if you get band 6 in grammar, you can still get a high score in the other criteria. So, control your weak areas and play your strengths.

Though it is not relevant to this post, I request you to clarify my doubt regarding writing task-2. – Most of the model essays given by you do not have the introduction that starts with a passive sentence like ‘It is believed/thought/argued/assumed’ and most of the body paragraphs also does not start with words like ‘on one hand/firstly/first of all’. Even though they are ranked 9 in the examiner comments section. So, my question here is, does following this pattern of beginning the paragraphs(both intro and body) give an impression to the examiner, that this is not original and its something which was by heart by the candidate?

Thanks Balaji

If your aim is to follow a template with set phrases and linking words, you will not get band 9. Band 9 is all about flexibility of language and connective devices.

Hello liz, i need your help please, my ielts results are withheld and are under scrutiny to ensure test integrity,what could that possibly mean.

See this page: https://ieltsliz.com/my-ielts-results-are-withheld-why/

Really awesome exercise, I really get confidence while doing this exercise. Please teacher Liz would you be kind enough to continue this kind of exercises for some time . I will be really grateful to you.

Some people believe that it is advantageous for businesses to sponsor occasions through advertising. When we do this, lack of extra cash can be raised to support sports matches and they can be continue for longer period. Moreover, businesses can donate the attire or machines which supports the occasion, groups and performers.

I’m glad the lesson was useful. The answers are now available: https://ieltsliz.com/answers-to-paraphrasing-practice-2/ . See my main writing task 2 page to find more lessons: https://ieltsliz.com/ielts-writing-task-2/

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FIrstly i want to thank liz for a amazing work you are really kindful person and good teacher .Thank you teacher. Some people believed that it is advantageous for business to sponser sporting occasion by means of advertising.when we do this, extra cash,which is lack of, can be collected more to support sport match and helps to continue to run. In addition, bussiness can also donate clothing or equipment which coordinate the event,groups and performer….

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Thank you dear teacher! Your lessons have extremelly been usefull since I follow them.

You’re welcome. I’ll post the answer to this lesson tomorrow 🙂

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Hello Liz, pls what can I do, I find it difficult to think deep while writhing an essay. Thanks

You shouldn’t be thinking deeply while writing. You should think deeply before you write. You should spend at least 5 mins planning ideas, selecting the best ideas, planning supporting points and planning organisation. When you start writing, all your ideas are decided and you can just write, paying attention to grammar and vocab.

Hi Liz, Thank you for this tip! it make a lot of sense

I guess a slight change is made in your paragraph from my first visit. Anyway, I hope this is good:

Some people believe that it is advantageous for businesses to sponsor sporting occasions using advertisements. In this way, extra cash can be raised , once in short supply, to aid and secure sports matches. By doing this, industries are able to (reduce performers’ worries about / contribute in) coordination of these events for example through donating the required attire (while they are preparing for match).

I put my first alternative phrases along with new one in parenthesis.

Sorry about that. Yes, I altered it as I thought it was too long for students. I’ll post the full answer tomorrow.

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Some people believe that it is advantageous for businesses to sponsor sports occasions through advertising. in this way, a lack of extra funding can be raised to supply sports events ensuring that they continue to run. Furthermore, industries can donate clothing or equipment to support the sports matches, teams and players.

Some people believe that it is good for some industries to sponsor sporting occasions through advertisements and selling ads ,in this case they can relieve the concerns over financial pressure and allowing the copmpetitors to concentrate more on the match.

Some people believe that it would be advantageous for industries to get involved in sporting occasions through advertisements. In this way, extra cash which is in short supply could be made readily available and sport matches easily coordinated. These businesses could also donate to perfomers their basic needs, consequently freeing them from any financial concerns and allowing them to concentrate an their match.

Some people believe that it is advantageous for industries to support sporting occasions through advertisements. In this way, extra cash which is in short fall can be raised to coordinate sport matches. And businesses can donate attires and equipment to performers, Consequently relieving financial concerns allowing players to concentrate on the match.

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Exercises on paraphrasing the task question..

Updated: Oct 20th 2021

In the last paraphrasing exercise here we looked at paraphrasing a part of a body paragraph. Here is a useful blog post on How to paraphrase in IELTS writing.

Paraphrasing is an important skill to practice in IELTS and is necessary for the writing tasks. If you can paraphrase well it shows that you have a wide range of vocabulary and this goes toward getting a high band score in Lexical resource.

Key points about paraphrasing

In the introduction of your essay the first thing you should do is paraphrase the topic question by using synonyms or changing the word-formation. I f you just copy the original question you will lose points .

A good technique is to change the form of the words by using: a verb, gerund, adjective or noun . Look at the examples below.

People increasingly access the news online these days rather than buying newspapers and magazines to find out what is going on in the world. There is an increase in people accessing the news online these days rather than buying newspapers and magazines to find out what is going on in the world.

I have changed two words above from Adverb+ verb in sentence 1, to noun phrase + gerund and re-ordered the sentence slightly. Using this technique you need to be confident with your grammar if you decide to change the word-formation.

You have to be careful when using synonyms though, click here to see a lesson about learning new words and the dangers of synonyms.

Let’s Practice Paraphrasing

This task is a problem-solution essay. Choose words from the list and try paraphrasing it. You do not need to paraphrase the instruction words. Check my answer when you have finished.

Practice it first before checking my answer.

My answer. (two variations)

a) People residing in large urban areas have to deal with a lot of issues in their day to day lives.

B) there are a number of issues that people living in cities have to cope with in their everyday lives..

I did not use the word ‘citizens ‘as it doesn’t fit well, the word ‘people’ is hard to paraphrase so I kept it.

Some words cannot be used here such as ‘ suburbs’  or  ‘towns’  there is a difference in meaning to ‘cities’. Also the word ‘huge’ doesn’t feel right here so I didn’t use it.

Remember that not every word has to be paraphrased , there is no black and white answer to paraphrasing, it depends on your vocabulary and how you can use synonyms correctly. Make sure the meaning stays the same or you will lose marks.

Let’s try another one

Try it yourself before checking my answer.

a) The Internet, which is a huge source of knowledge, has created opportunities for people worldwide to study.

B) the worldwide web is a massive source of information and has given people all over the world the ability to study..

Some words do not go well here such as ‘ folks’ which is too informal and ‘humankind’ which does not sound right in this situation.

The words ‘data’ and ‘know-how’ just do not match well here and could change the meaning slightly.

Again, I have kept the word ‘people’ as this is hard to paraphrase.

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